The opening scene sort of fell into my head one morning in that fuzzy period just before you wake. When these two kooky prehistoric characters started talking, I thought the best thing to do was take notes and hope they kept it up.
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Friends Do Not Eat Friends is the first book in Jill Esbaum's new graphic early reader series. |
How is planning and writing a series different from writing a stand-alone book? Can you give us any hints about other books in the series?
This is the first time I've done any kind of fiction series, and it wasn't planned, so an expert, I am not. I first wrote Thunder & Cluck as a picture book, a funny story of how they became unlikely friends. That was rejected a few times. My agent suggested I use these characters to write a 3,000 word young chapter book. That manuscript had a nibble, but was ultimately rejected, as well. My agent then suggested I try the duo in an early reader--a pair of manuscripts she could submit together.
Too invested in these characters to throw in the towel, I cut and cut and cut until nothing was left but a 500-word, all-dialogue story. My stubbornness paid off when we got the call that Simon & Schuster wanted Thunder & Cluck - Friends Do Not Eat Friends as one of the lead titles in their new graphic early readers line. A happy dance moment, for sure!
They wanted to release three books quickly, so then came the frantic planning of book #3. Fortunately, I had that chapter book to pull scenes from. Guess it's true that nothing you write ever goes to waste. Book #2, Thunder & Cluck - The Brave Friend Leads the Way, will release in late August. In that story, the duo clashes over which of them is braver. Next spring comes Book #3, Thunder & Cluck - Smart vs Strong.
Did you have to learn any new techniques to write in the graphic format? Did you have to modify your usual writing process? If so, how?
No, I wasn't even aware it would be a graphic format until the manuscripts sold. After the first book's art was in, I learned my series would be a Level One, which meant I had to eliminate all contractions. That, I learned, was easier said than done -- tough to keep characters sounding natural when every can't becomes cannot, etc. But I'm a word nerd, so revision is my idea of fun.
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Inside the first book: Thunder meets Cluck. |
You’ve written a number of funny books. Does humor come naturally to you, or do you have to work at it?
Both. Lines that make me laugh out loud the first three or four times I read a manuscript quickly lose that element of surprise. By the 50th read, those funny bits are stale, stale, stale--or maybe I've tweaked the story structure so they no longer even work. But the revision process, when I'm honing the voice and really knowing, finally, what I want the story to sound like, often leads to serendipitous moments, when lines pop up I never would have thought of the first 50 times through.
Many early readers have strict requirements, such as using specific vocabulary, avoiding contractions, and defining new words in the text, all of which could add more words. It seems to me that the graphic format would require a writer to be very brief. How do you balance those requirements?
Parameters are imperative, of course, but I don't have any in mind while creating. I've perused K-2 word lists, so those are likely stuck in my head. Or it could be that my writing spills out at a 1st-grade level because of the many books I've written for National Geographic over the years.
Or maybe I just think/talk like a 6 year old.
All I know when I begin is that I have about 500 words and 64 pages to play with. One of the most enjoyable things about writing these is that I get to add very detailed art notes that include body language, attitude, facial expressions...that's a blast and an ENTIRELY different mindset from writing picture books. Once I saw the kind of magic brilliant illustrator Miles Thompson was capable of, the writing/cutting process became a lot more fun.
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Here's another sneak peek. |
Do you have a favorite piece of advice for writers?
Learn to critique your own work as an editor would. You can develop your critical eye by 1) endless reading and writing, and 2) critiquing other people's manuscripts in a crit group or some kind of manuscript exchange. There's nothing like critiquing other people's writing to help you zero in on your own problem areas.
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31 comments:
Can't wait to see this on the shelves. I enjoy all of Jill's books and have given many as gifts.
What a fascinating interview! I enjoyed reading how this book came to be and then became a series of three. I also appreciated the discussion about rejections, despite having so many previously published works. Congratulations on succeeding in a new writing challenge and stretching your talents into graphic novels.
I always learn something useful from a Jill Esbaum interview and this was no exception! Congratulations and thank you for taking us on your books journey from one format to the next!
This sounds like such a fun series! I'm sure it will be right up my 6-year-old grandson's alley. I really enjoyed hearing about how it came to be. Another instance of Persistence Pays Off!
Jill's books are always a delight. This one, too!
Love the story of how the series came to be!
Always in awe of Jill's books and also heard her present at a conference a few years back. Will be excited to see her graphic novel series- exciting and congrats!
Great interview - and I love the evolution from picture book to graphic early reader. These look like awesome new characters to meet!
This is a great reminder to not give up on characters or a story. Congratulations!
Great post! Thanks for sharing how this new series came about, Jill! Yes, it sounds like a lot of fun, and how neat S&S wanted 2 more!
It's such a great story, and the art looks amazing. What an innovative way to craft a picture book--amazing!
Thank you all!!!
Jill
This sounds delightful, Jill! I can't wait to read it.
This is the first I have heard of this blog. I love Jill Esbaum and this interview was great.
I love your description of the process you went through to get to the right format. It helps to see that sometimes you have to just keep trying. This series looks great and I can't wait to introduce these books to my class!
Thank you for this super interview/exhcange. If anyone ever has an opportunity to attend an actual workshop or coaching session with Jill, be sure to do so! S much wisdom to share, creativity to inspire, and fun to be and in this new series. Exciting!
Thanks for the great hints. The books look like a lot of fun.
What a FABULOUS interview! Both the questions and the answers. Great info presented clearly and succinctly. Congratulations, Jill, and fab work, JoAnn!
Great interview, JoAnn! Loved hearing the backstory for THUNDER AND CLUCK. Congratulations, Jill!!
How fun does this book sounds!!! Thanks for sharing!
I just love Jill’s books & can’t wait for this series! You’re right, she is a very talented author, inspiring mentor, and a really nice friend. So happy for every success she has!!! 💖
I have benefitted from Jill's teaching. She runs great retreats. 👍 Congrats in this series. Can't wait to read it.
I have a young reader in mind who would love this series! Thanks for sharing!
This book looks like a hoot of fun!
Looks like a fun read! Congratulations! :)
The perseverance paid off! The titles alone are so fun.
Jill's books are always delightful! I can't wait to see her new graphic early readers!
Anxious to read the book! Looks like a fun one!
Thanks, everyone! So nice to see all your comments! I'm glad you enjoyed the post!
I'm such a huge Jill Esbaum fan! Can't wait to read this one. Looks adorable! Congrats!
I think my grandbaby gonna like this 😊🌈🦄🦋
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