Howdy, Campers ~ and Happy Poetry Friday! (poems and link to PF below)
I've been playing with Golden Shovel poems a lot lately--they seem to tap into my pandemic-related moods I'm not even aware I have. Recently I began to use dictionary definitions instead of a line from someone's poem. I call those Golden Definition poems. And now I'm splashing in the waters of what I call Golden Quote poems.
The idea behind all of these forms is the same: take one line and use each word of that line (in order) to end each line of your poem. C'est tout--that's it!
I'll keep this short (hard for me!). Here are four of my Golden Something or Other poems:
2 GOLDEN DEFINITION POEMS
LOST
by April Halprin Wayland
I keep wanting things. I keep having
them, and then they're gone.
I keep flicking ashes, watching them go astray.
I keep playing with my watch or
watching mists disappear. I feel I've missed
something or someone. The
one thing that steadies me is the way
you sit still when I talk about being bewildered
in this wilderness. I feel I need a machete as sharp as
a surgeon's scalpel, something that hurts to
use. I keep opening drawers. I keep opening doors, as if I'm about to place
one foot outside. Should I? Should I put it on this wet grass, going off in a new direction?
poem (c) 2020 April Halprin Wayland. All rights reserved.
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One definition of LOST: having gone astray or missed the way; bewildered as to place, direction, etc.
(I played with the last line just being "Etc," but that
didn't work. Then I made it longer, but it was a depressing ending. So I
ignored the "etc." And I can do that because I'm Goddess of Not-A-Golden-Shovel poems.)
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THERE IS NO HOPE
by April Halprin Wayland
There is no hope,
but what there is
is everything else: the
jewels beneath the ocean, the feeling
that shivers over my arms when you do that,
a little blond head sticking out the window to see what
the squirrel is doing. There truly is
a field full of all the things I've always wanted—
so full, in fact, that I can
spend the rest of my life and be
in love with all the things I have and I've had.
poem (c) 2020 April Halprin Wayland. All rights reserved.
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HOPE: Hope is the feeling that what is wanted can be
had.
drawing (c) April Halprin Wayland |
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2 GOLDEN QUOTE POEMS
FIX EVERYTHING
by April Halprin Wayland
First there was the bear. But she was tired,
and by the looks of him, the bear was tired
too, with
dark circles under his eyes and seemingly nothing
going on in his tired
head. And with
everything the way it was, everything
sliding down the hill towards them, she was too tired
to deal with
something as trivial as the
bear. Surely the world’s
phone directory was heavy with other saviors. In fact, guess its weight:
there had to be a lot of goddamn golden names in there. Or what about the bear? He
was snoozing now. Choose HIM. Had
he ever raised his paw to help? Never.
Which meant it was his time to step up. He should be the one chosen
to fix everything, to
save the whole goddamn world, not her. Are you listening, Bear?
poem (c) 2020 April Halprin Wayland. All rights reserved.
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THANK THE DOG
by April Halprin Wayland
She wanted to thank
the dog. "Do you
write him a letter, do you thank him for
licking you?" she wondered. Listening
to him scratch his rump (thump, thump, thump), she was overwhelmed with
love. Finally, she wrote, "Oh how I love your
wagging tail, your chocolate eyes!"
poem (c) 2020 April Halprin Wayland. All rights reserved.
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Here's the quote from my friend Julie Rose Palmer, writer, poet, artist and musician. She wrote, “Thank you for listening with your eyes.” (about reading her emails).
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How about you? Try a GOLDEN SOMETHING-OR-OTHER poem ~ invent it. Then write it!
Thank you, Ramona, for hosting Poetry Friday at Pleasures From the Page!
posted with hope and gratitude by April Halprin Wayland and her dog, Eli
drawing (c) April Halprin Wayland |
Dear Goddess of Not-A-Golden-Shovel: thank you for your beautiful words today... new directions and hope and bears! It seems you are having fun with these beautiful golden things, and that alone is reason enough to do them! xo
ReplyDeleteHaving fun is what writing poetry has become for me, Irene. Not a thing I have to do every day, the cherry on the top of each day. Thank you for your beautiful works you continue to pour into the world for all of us.
DeleteA golden definition? Wow! I love that idea...and the lonesome place the poem took me. What wonderful lines of conversation between you and quotes as well. I'm glad you're having fun. These are fun to read. You give me ideas!
ReplyDeleteGreat, Linda! And isn't that what this community is all about? Giving each other ideas? Playing with words?
DeleteI suspect you can be a goddess of anything you desire, April, this time, a golden shovel! I think I might try another you've inspired me so! I especially loved "Should I put it on this wet grass" - so much in that thought, at least to me. And I don't have a pet anymore but get some love from a granddog when I visit, loving his "chocolate eyes" & so I thank him!
ReplyDeleteLinda B ~ it's interesting that you talked about that wet grass... It's such a rich physical sensation to me. The difference between staying inside a stuffy home and tentatively touching all of the outdoors...
DeleteI'm charmed by these conversational, clever poems! Thanks, April! xo
ReplyDeleteThank you Tabitha. I really appreciate you coming here today. 💕
DeleteSuch a wonderful collection of golden poems! Thanks for sharing all the varieties with us. I wrote a golden quotation poem early during the pandemic (quote from Irene in Dictionary for a Better World) and it's still on my fridge. It's easy to see how much fun you had with this activity and I'm sure we'll see more play to come in future weeks from our community.
ReplyDeleteHow you have time to respond to everyone is beyond me! Thanks for your comment, Ramona. 🤗💕
DeleteApril, Golden Shovel poems, as many of us know, provide a fascinating challenge. Whilst rewarding, they do require persistence and word agility. For this reason I believe you deserve a gold medal for your prolific output here. Clearly you have thrown yourself into this with significant endeavour. Well done!
ReplyDeleteWow, Alan, thank you! ~ I'll accept that gold medal on behalf of all the gold poems that blossom in our community!
DeleteThese are wonderful! I love how you've created your own version of golden shovels and to such wonderful effect. Both "Lost" and "Hope" really moved me. That curious, wondering "little blonde head" especially gets to me. Thanks for reminding me again of the "field full of all the things I've always wanted." I'm excited to give your new forms a try!
ReplyDeletembhmaine ~ thank you. I just came back to this post and realized I hadn't said hello to everyone. I love that"little blonde head," too... I looked around the room and saw a photo of my boy when he was young...presto ~ that piece of the poem.
DeleteApril, your posts got me started on a self-directed journey of poetic form challenges (some of which I'm doing with my wonderful poetry critique group) that seem to open my brain to poetry I wouldn't have known was there! Thank you for today's "golden" post!
ReplyDeleteThat's wonderful, Carol. Inventing forms is so freeing!
DeleteThese are wonderful, April. I especially liked. "There is No Hope." And then of course, there is.
ReplyDelete... I need to see the world that way, Janice
DeleteEspecially now. ❤️
I love where this format takes you, April (& takes me, too, as a reader). Fabu, say I.
ReplyDeleteThank you, CS! And thank you, always, for dropping by. Someday we'll gather and write with others again. I would like that.
DeleteApril, how much fun you had writing your Golden Poems. I do like writing golden shovel poems but your golden somethings have their appeal to me also. There is No Hope was one of those that I fell in love with.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Carol. Hope came to me as I wrote that one.
DeleteGolden shovels are one of my favorite forms. How clever of you to come up with these variations! I love how "There is No Hope" still manages to end with love and grace. And I love the idea of writing a thank you note to the dog. Now I'm off to find my dictionary...
ReplyDeleteWarning, Catherine ~ choose short definitions and quotes!
DeleteI love your claim to be the Goddess of Golden Something or Other poems. These are so wonderful. I enjoyed wandering the lines to try to find the shovel, then going back to dig deeper into your own lines. Thanks!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Margaret! I'm embarrassed that it's taken me so long to respond to yours and others' comments, when you hosted Poetry Friday and commented all day ~ wow!
DeleteOh, Dear April - I hear YOUR voice in each one of these stitched-together golden word wonders. (Though I am jaded/cynical enough not to have been able to get Russia out of my mind with the Bear poem... that symbol is too strong for me these days! Intentional?)
ReplyDeleteThank you for your usual: frankness and hope all intertwined. XO
Robyn. I had to go back and check out that poem! Russia wasn't on radar when I wrote it... but it's neat that YOU made this connection.
ReplyDeleteDon't we always say that readers are allowed to layer their own ideas on literature? So,cool!